02 July 2009

The first haiku




Hujan pagi :
menitis lesu satu persatu
sesak nafas berjerebu





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51 comments:

besi said...

jerebu menyesakkan...
tapi kabus pagi menyegarkan

ok ke dr sam?

Tny said...

Haiku tu? Embun ke?
May you have a nice day ahead =)

nAz said...

bumi sakit dan kita hanya melihatnya..

Razak said...

Salam
Pembukaan tirai July ker Dr? Selamat menjalankan tugas

patungcendana said...

haiku is a japoanese verse yang mengandungi 7 atau 9 perkataan...kan doc?

DrSam said...

besi,
dua tiga hari ni hujan, lega sikit mata memandang.

Tny,
Haiku tu sejenis genre puisi Jepun. Siapa yang suka tengok anime Jepun, kalau perasan ada banyak juga digunakan haiku ni.

nAz,
sakit mata sakit hati. masing-masing setiap individu boleh memainkan peranan jika mahu.

Razak,
salam. lebih kurang begitu lah :)

patungcendana,
betul sebetul betulnya

encik ariff said...

puitis.
;)

tchersally said...

Apa itu Haiku?

Hye doc,

according to our Japanese Language teacher..Reza San..http://gendainojinsei.blogspot.com/2009/02/haiku.html .. Haiku adalah sajak tradisional Jepun yg pendek. Setiap sajak hanya mengandungi rangkap ganjil dan setiap rangkap hanya boleh mengandungi 3 baris ayat sahaja. Baris pertama dengan 5 suku kata..kedua 7 dan ketiga 5 ..atau secara ringkasnya..format 5-7-5.

happy day a head doc!!

madam gold said...

Pandai doc berhaiku ya.My last haiku was in my poetry class puluhan tahun yahg lalu...

Zendra said...

Hai! Ku di sini
Minimal but berisi
No saki-baki

hehe amacam zen tak?

patungcendana said...

re:...so right doc

tapi...aku hanya si naga terbang...

DrSam said...

encik ariff,
coobaan pertama

tchersally,
pada fahaman saya begitulah.

Cuma pendapat saya, untuk berkarya atau melakukan sesuatu yang seni mungkin agak kaku jika terlalu sangat terkongkong atau diikat pada peraturan yang tidak anjal. minda merdeka akan lebih bebas bercambah.

madam gold,
cuba-cuba aje. Ada sifu boleh bantu.

DrSam said...

Zendra,
Nicely composed! Memang ada Zen...

patungcendana,
terbang bersayap
waktu petang penat
singgah kesarang

SRISUFI said...

Salam Dr Sam,

Kabare?

~Hujan rahmat tu Dr. hehehe

Oldstock said...

menitis lesu
menambah pilu
aaah!
bilakah nak lenyap
dari ingatanku...

DrSam said...

SRISUFI,
Salam. saya kewarasan :)

Memang rahmat yang dinanti.

Oldstock,
fulamak...bakat-bakat terpendam kian timbul. Harap-harap sama digilap agar tidak malap.

Si Penconteng said...
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Si Penconteng said...

Hitam dan legam
Tinta putih menconteng
Haiku pertama

♥chentaMAYA™ said...

ringkas!
tp penoh makne!~

Sir Pök Déng said...

Dan saya mula merasa bau hujan setelah membaca puisi ringkas ini. :D

miezi said...

and it is the reason why i came in late today to work, heh :p

DrSam said...

Si Penconteng,
Boleh tahan
teruskan...teruskan
jangan pandang belakang

chentaMAYA,
bahasa ringkas untuk mesej yang santai

Sir Pok Deng,
bau hujan
segar sama seperti bau rumput
baru potong

miesi,
I was about to ditch in that same line too, really :)

pal7 said...

hujan pagi?..
sedapnya tido..lalala

umie@kakyong said...

Salam...
Dr yang berjiwa halus dan berseni..

*SiRibenMerah said...

huishh.. haiku neh best.. mcm layan lagu I Go.. hikhikhik..

*meh la melawat kita di kepulauan neh.. hikss.. kem salam sis zayda.. ckp dia hajat riben x kesampaian nk merasa resepi air tgn sis zayda.. ouhh.. shahdu neh...

mizzyN said...

o ini haiku.

Brian Kinney said...

i never know you do poem too :)

kojah said...

tak paham...hoho

Hidup KOKA said...

Jerebu....

Pasal hutan terbakar kat sumatera ke?

DrSam said...

pal7,
kalau hujan pagi-pagi kat kampung lagi mengasyikkan. Dengar air hujan menitis dibumbung pun satu nikmat tidak terhingga - halwa telinga.

umie@kakyong,
salam,
seni itu halus :)

SiRibenMerah,
Nanti bila ada kelapangan saya ajak famili berhaiku-haika di pulau nun jauh disana.

mizzyN,
ini haiku cubaan pertama.


Brian Kinney,
simply trying to tickle the creative side of me.

kojah,
tak mengapa. kekadang tu bila dibaca kembali coretan-coretan lama dulu-dulu pun, penulis sendiri pun mungkin tidak akan faham apa maksud coretan yand diluahkan. Coretan diluah mengikut citarasa dan cetusan semasa :)

hidup KOKA,
jerebu pembakaran hutan memang tiap-tiap tahun berlaku dan tiada kesudahan. Itu sudah menjadi acara tahunan.

Jerebu dimata, jerebu dihati ni yang payah...

ShiDa said...

Hujan + Tidur = Nikmat..
He..He.. he..

Dr sihat??

xiiinam said...

makan dalam ni Dr.....

MariaFaizal said...

Doc,
Sorry missed out your updates [so occupied wz new job :(]

Do take care & send my love to Sis Zayda & your handsome heroes :D

CAHAYA said...

I'm on night shift this month. It feels like sauna during noon at home. Can't hardly catch my beauty sleep.

DrSam said...

ShiDa,
hujan terus tidur
kalau tidur hujan pun tak perasan :)

Saya sihat alhamdulillah. Tq.

ziinam,
lagi digali lagi dalam

MariaFaizal,
Hi Maria. Ah soooo...it explains your long absenteeism. Hope you find the new place a refreshing experience.

Have a nice day.

CAHAYA,
Morning rain for the past few days brings the temperature down a bit. Lucky you to have your own sauna in the comfort of your home :)

THE TIME TRAVEL TALE said...

haiiiiii... Dr.Sam
apa khabarrrrr...?

simple... kan ayat2 tu..:)

Hope said...

Hi Dr Sam,

There's something for you on my blog :)

CaBaiKeRinG said...

sam

i miss the mengeteh session so much.. wish like flying there everyday!

but life is so occupied with my so called online biz now.. and the kids of course

further more... im going to start work as well.. next week..'

take care n send my salam ti sis zayda ye

VersedAnggerik said...

ahhhh.... poetic streak, I see!

DrSam said...

THE TIME TRAVEL TALE,
Khabar baik sahabat. tukar nick lagi nampak :)

Hope,
Thank you for your nice thought of me.

CaBaiKeRinG,
Hi CK. Good to hear your online business is flourishing. Your lovely kids of course will keep you occupied as well, plus the hubby ;)

Got a new job? congratulation! A join celebration (you and Maria) is due :)

Have a nice day.

VersedAnggerik,
It happened only once in a blue moon...

laki cikgu kimia said...

what a scene..

anntaj said...

salam...
drsam....
ayat yg simple....

*have a nice day
:)

PerantauSepi1306 said...

let's try to green the earth back.. stop building, start planting.. consume and re-use of what we have now...

Zue said...

Baru hari ni dapat berblog.
DrSam...I tak berapa pahamlah haiku tu

Brian Kinney said...

usually doctor should be straight forward instead of creative.

now i know, that i'm wrong :)

yginsaf4 said...

bahasa puisi yg indah tewww.. salammm

DrSam said...

laki cikgu kimia,
:)

anntaj,
salam. simple juga indah.

Have a great day to you too!

PerantauSepi1306,
A good campaign. Will surely support that. Tq.

Zue,
Kemana menghilang?

Brian Kinney,
everything should be plain straight forward. No gohead and gostan.


yginsaf4,
tafsiran mengikut rasa

Zareda Norman said...

Dr sam

berhaiku sekarang? kadangkala melayan haiku lebih menenangkan, betul tak?

DrSam said...

Zareda Norman,
layan bila ilham mendatang.

Zue said...

I ada...just busy..
ingat nak buat lawatan sekali lagi ke your lab..

DrSam said...

Zue,
Pas de probleme. 27th. onward ada student, can join if you want.

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